Wednesday, 14 August 2024

Ode to a painful love

 

 
 ODE TO PAINFUL LOVE

Let not our love

Slip through our fingers

You bit my bum

And the pain still lingers.

 
I screamed and cried

 
“You ain't nothin' but a hound dog

Biting all the time

You ain't nothin' but a hound dog

Biting all the time

  Bit my behind so hard and you ain't no friend of mine.”

16 comments:

  1. Hi Victor, try filing his teeth. God bless you.

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    1. I like that Muttley cartoon dog. Great laugh.

      God bless, Brenda.

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  2. ...you have a quite a way with words.

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    1. I hope to get nominated for the Nobel Prize for Poetry.

      God bless you, Tom.

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    2. ...I hope you won't be disappointed.

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    3. Oh yes ... there'll be celebrations !!!

      God bless.

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  3. Oh, this (title) had me worried! Having suffered more than a few dog bites, I still love them all.
    Do you suppose God feels that way about us?

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    1. You are very good at "reading me" Mevely. Yes, how often when things go wrong we turn against God and blame Him for allowing it to happen to us? We growl and bite back. He understands our natural instinctive reaction; because He created us. And He forgives; time and again ... if we ask Him.

      God bless you always.

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  4. This post had me "all shook up" with laughter, Victor - LOL! By the way, I ordered your latest book this week, and am looking forward to reading it. Blessings!

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    1. Thank you so much for being "all shook up" Martha and for buying "Appointment with Murder". Please let me know what you think of the moral dilemma at the end. Was Fr I right in what he did?

      God bless.

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  5. Heeheehee! Thanks for the smiles.

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  6. ❤️
    —-Cheerful Monk

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